I chose the Cask of Amontillado, now I realize that I am not enough of an established reader/writer to criticize Edgar Allen Poe,  but because this is assigned,  I may as well start.

      I think that the narrator was out for revenge, mainly because the opening paragraph states that Fortunato had done great harm or a great deal of things to our narrator. I also like the thought of giving your readers just about full imagination to the main character. What I mean with that statement is you can make up the personality of the character, the nationality, and the appearance, but in respect to that statement I think you should at least give a gender or a name to the character.

I also think that you were very clever in hiding the body and making sure that there were no witnesses;  I admire that.