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A Handful of Clay

Henry Van Dyke

February 12, 2003

Dear Mr. Van Dyke,

        As I was reading your story at the beginning to be truthful I thought that it wasn't interesting at all.  As I kept reading I though and I found out that the story did have a point to it.  What i got out of it was that The Clay went though anything because it knew at the end of its journey that it would have something to look forward too.  That is so true in real life also.  To get to something that you really want to do you always have to go though many obstacles. 

        I thought the story had a very good point to it.  I was wondering why you picked to use clay as the main character?  Why didn't you use a person instead.  I thought it was kind of confusing to understand.

        All together I thought that your story was very good and had a very good point to it.  I'm looking forward to reading many more of your short stories, because from just reading one I think that you have very good lessons on life.  Very good ways to describe them also.

 

The Blue  Flower

Henry Van dyke

 

 

Me:  "Hey there!  How are you doing?"

Boy:  "I'm good.  How are you?"

Me:  "Great......Well I read about your dream that you had...I thought it was very sweet.  Do you always have dreams about cool things like that?"

Boy:  "Well, sometimes I do.  For some reason this dream was special.  I think it was trying to tell me something."

Me:  "Well of course all dreams have a story.  I think that all dreams have a purpose and are trying to tell something.  At the end of your dream when you say that flower opened, what do you think was supposed to be the lesson to that?"

Boy:  "I don't know.  It might have to do with my girlfriend and me because we have been together forever!" 

Me: "Yeah, I always have dreams and then they happen in real life.  I had a dream that my brother would get married, then not more then 4 months later we heard that his fiancée and he were planning a wedding.  Isn't that crazy how that happens?"

Boy: "Yeah, well I hope that my girlfriend and I get married.  Well I'm sorry Niki, I have to go.  I'll talk to you some other time ok. Bye for now."

Me:  "Yep see you later."

 

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The Childs Story

Charles Dickens

Once upon a time, a good many years ago, there was a traveller, and he set out upon a journey. It was a magic journey, and was to seem very long when he began it, and very short when he got half way through.

The author is the one telling the story about a man and a child. The author is talking about a boy that is all i know so far.

He travelled along a rather dark path for some little time, without meeting anything, until at last he came to a beautiful child. So he said to the child, "What do you do here?" And the child said, "I am always at play. Come and play with me!"

the exposition is a man walking along a rather dark path. Another character appears it is a small child that loves to play

So, he played with that child, the whole day long, and they were very merry. The sky was so blue, the sun was so bright, the water was so sparkling, the leaves were so green, the flowers were so lovely, and they heard such singing-birds and saw so many butteries, that everything was beautiful. This was in fine weather. When it rained, they loved to watch the falling drops, and to smell the fresh scents. When it blew, it was delightful to listen to the wind, and fancy what it said, as it came rushing from its home-- where was that, they wondered!--whistling and howling, driving the clouds before it, bending the trees, rumbling in the chimneys, shaking the house, and making the sea roar in fury. But, when it snowed, that was best of all; for, they liked nothing so well as to look up at the white flakes falling fast and thick, like down from the breasts of millions of white birds; and to see how smooth and deep the drift was; and to listen to the hush upon the paths and roads.

it was in the day time, sounds like it was in the summer because the author describes the leaves on the trees were so green. it explained many different times that they played outside winter, summer, fall, spring.

They had plenty of the finest toys in the world, and the most astonishing picture-books: all about scimitars and slippers and turbans, and dwarfs and giants and genii and fairies, and blue- beards and bean-stalks and riches and caverns and forests and Valentines and Orsons: and all new and all true.

But, one day, of a sudden, the traveller lost the child. He called to him over and over again, but got no answer. So, he went upon his road, and went on for a little while without meeting anything, until at last he came to a handsome boy. So, he said to the boy, "What do you do here?" And the boy said, "I am always learning. Come and learn with me."

Now the setting moved to a road because the man lost the little boy that he used to play with

So he learned with that boy about Jupiter and Juno, and the Greeks and the Romans, and I don't know what, and learned more than I could tell--or he either, for he soon forgot a great deal of it. But, they were not always learning; they had the merriest games that ever were played. They rowed upon the river in summer, and skated on the ice in winter; they were active afoot, and active on horseback; at cricket, and all games at ball; at prisoner's base, hare and hounds, follow my leader, and more sports than I can think of; nobody could beat them. They had holidays too, and Twelfth cakes, and parties where they danced till midnight, and real Theatres where they saw palaces of real gold and silver rise out of the real earth, and saw all the wonders of the world at once. As to friends, they had such dear friends and so many of them, that I want the time to reckon them up. They were all young, like the handsome boy, and were never to be strange to one another all their lives through.

I think that this boy is a symbol of learning, like the boy before was a symbol of playing, I think that he will meet more kids and they will be symbols to something. I think that is happening so the older man learns more things.
I think that the man that is meeting different children is the rising action

Still, one day, in the midst of all these pleasures, the traveller lost the boy as he had lost the child, and, after calling to him in vain, went on upon his journey. So he went on for a little while without seeing anything, until at last he came to a young man. So, he said to the young man, "What do you do here?" And the young man said, "I am always in love. Come and love with me."

So, he went away with that young man, and presently they came to one of the prettiest girls that ever was seen--just like Fanny in the corner there--and she had eyes like Fanny, and hair like Fanny, and dimples like Fanny's, and she laughed and coloured just as Fanny does while I am talking about her. So, the young man fell in love directly--just as Somebody I won't mention, the first time he came here, did with Fanny. Well! he was teased sometimes--just as Somebody used to be by Fanny; and they quarrelled sometimes--just as Somebody and Fanny used to quarrel; and they made it up, and sat in the dark, and wrote letters every day, and never were happy asunder, and were always looking out for one another and pretending not to, and were engaged at Christmas-time, and sat close to one another by the fire, and were going to be married very soon--all exactly like Somebody I won't mention, and Fanny!

Introduced to 2 new characters- a boy that loved to love- and also a girl that had eyes, hair and dimples like Fannys

But, the traveller lost them one day, as he had lost the rest of his friends, and, after calling to them to come back, which they never did, went on upon his journey. So, he went on for a little while without seeing anything, until at last he came to a middle-aged gentleman. So, he said to the gentleman, "What are you doing here?" And his answer was, "I am always busy. Come and be busy with me!"

The man met another character and it was a busy middle-aged man. So the man went to be busy

So, he began to be very busy with that gentleman, and they went on through the wood together. The whole journey was through a wood, only it had been open and green at first, like a wood in spring; and now began to be thick and dark, like a wood in summer; some of the little trees that had come out earliest, were even turning brown. The gentleman was not alone, but had a lady of about the same age with him, who was his Wife; and they had children, who were with them too. So, they all went on together through the wood, cutting down the trees, and making a path through the branches and the fallen leaves, and carrying burdens, and working hard.

They were being busy in the woods as they were they were by spring wood and then it became dark and thick like the wood in summer. The middle-aged man also has a wife and children.

Sometimes, they came to a long green avenue that opened into deeper woods. Then they would hear a very little, distant voice crying, "Father, father, I am another child! Stop for me!" And presently they would see a very little figure, growing larger as it came along, running to join them. When it came up, they all crowded round it, and kissed and welcomed it; and then they all went on together.

They meet a very little figure that is a new character

Sometimes, they came to several avenues at once, and then they all stood still, and one of the children said, "Father, I am going to sea," and another said, "Father, I am going to India," and another, "Father, I am going to seek my fortune where I can," and another, "Father, I am going to Heaven!" So, with many tears at parting, they went, solitary, down those avenues, each child upon its way; and the child who went to Heaven, rose into the golden air and vanished.

Every child went to a different place. One to the sea, India, and heaven. The child that went to heaven vanished into the air
i think that this paragraph is the climax of the story because all of the children are leaving the man

Whenever these partings happened, the traveller looked at the gentleman, and saw him glance up at the sky above the trees, where the day was beginning to decline, and the sunset to come on. He saw, too, that his hair was turning grey. But, they never could rest long, for they had their journey to perform, and it was necessary for them to be always busy.

the mans hair was turning gray now

At last, there had been so many partings that there were no children left, and only the traveller, the gentleman, and the lady, went upon their way in company. And now the wood was yellow; and now brown; and the leaves, even of the forest trees, began to fall.

all of the children left. The wood turned yelllow and now brown the leaves and forest trees began to fall

So, they came to an avenue that was darker than the rest, and were pressing forward on their journey without looking down it when the lady stopped.

"My husband," said the lady. "I am called."

They listened, and they heard a voice a long way down the avenue, say, "Mother, mother!"

It was the voice of the first child who had said, "I am going to Heaven!" and the father said, "I pray not yet. The sunset is very near. I pray not yet!"

But, the voice cried, "Mother, mother!" without minding him, though his hair was now quite white, and tears were on his face.

the mans hair was white and tears were on his face

Then, the mother, who was already drawn into the shade of the dark avenue and moving away with her arms still round his neck, kissed him, and said, "My dearest, I am summoned, and I go!" And she was gone. And the traveller and he were left alone together.

the mother left the child and the man alone. this is the starting of the falling action

And they went on and on together, until they came to very near the end of the wood: so near, that they could see the sunset shining red before them through the trees.

Yet, once more, while he broke his way among the branches, the traveller lost his friend. He called and called, but there was no reply, and when he passed out of the wood, and saw the peaceful sun going down upon a wide purple prospect, he came to an old man sitting on a fallen tree. So, he said to the old man, "What do you do here?" And the old man said with a calm smile, "I am always remembering. Come and remember with me!"

The man left the woods and the saw a new character and he was a remembering character

So the traveller sat down by the side of that old man, face to face with the serene sunset; and all his friends came softly back and stood around him. The beautiful child, the handsome boy, the young man in love, the father, mother, and children: every one of them was there, and he had lost nothing. So, he loved them all, and was kind and forbearing with them all, and was always pleased to watch them all, and they all honoured and loved him. And I think the traveller must be yourself, dear Grandfather, because this what you do to us, and what we do to you.

I think the theme of the short story is that everybody is always busy and you need to love everybody.........you always have time to remember things.